Yes, one immediate and non-technical way to improve this is to smooth out the copy. Another example: Start having job interviews I would suggest editing this

Yes, one immediate and non-technical way to improve this is to smooth out the copy. Another example: Start having job interviews I would suggest editing this to "start getting job interviews." The verb is more active and immediate, making the user feel they are receiving a benefit from your service instead of an incidental. It may sound like a quibble, but to me the landing page copy is just as important, if not more important, than the design elements.