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I'm not sure I understand your criticism here, care to elaborate?

• stevejohnson 13y ago
  I think he means if it says "your flight" it could also say "your name."
  • ygra 13y ago
    Those sections are for different readers, though. And at least I rarely need to be told my name in case I forgot.
    • marcins 13y ago
      If you haven't needed reminding of what your name is then you haven't been properly jetlagged ;)
• function_seven 13y ago
  "Your flight" refers to the holder with a 2nd-person pronoun whereas "Passenger Name" refers to them in the 3rd-person. So maybe "Your name" (sounds weird) or "Passenger flight" (label may be too long for the field beneath it?). I don't see this as a huge issue. I would change the labels to simply "Flight" and "Passenger"
• matsur 13y ago
  The labels are not parallel [0]. Something like ("Your flight" and "Your name") OR ("Flight number" and "Passenger Name") would be more grammatically consistent. [0] http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Parallelism_(grammar) http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Parallelism_(grammar)