> Not too scary, this markup. I find this one acceptable. > In our opinion not ideal, this markup pattern. This is very clumsy, perhaps even ungrammatical. T

> Not too scary, this markup. I find this one acceptable. > In our opinion not ideal, this markup pattern. This is very clumsy, perhaps even ungrammatical. The addition of "in our opinion" ruins it. However, please note that I am not a native anglophone.