Good work. The main problem here is that you only had two paragraphs of argument instead of three. You could have used that third paragraph to argue the benef

Good work. The main problem here is that you only had two paragraphs of argument instead of three. You could have used that third paragraph to argue the benefits of a five paragraph structure, making your essay less of a polemic. Otherwise, your point was effectively argued, and I like how stop is your last word. 8/10.