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Story seems to lack...well a story. What was your business? How did you try to convert the gamer influx as paying customers? Did the gamers in question note the
by thoughtpalette 13y ago
Story seems to lack...well a story. What was your business? How did you try to convert the gamer influx as paying customers? Did the gamers in question note they started to get blocked? etc.
Give some substance.
- mkrecny 13y agoI don't mention what my business as it's not really relevant, and might seem like I'm trying to sell. You say that it lacks a story ... it's just real life, which doesn't always contain a story.
- hga 13y agoIt's enough substance for me, e.g. the quoted stuff makes it pretty clear that conversions were not going to happen. Well, maybe he could try to figure out if any did happen. It's short, simple, and useful; tells you there are groups from which you aren't going to get any money, warns you to be on the lookout for such crowds paying attention to your site, etc.