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What can I do to make it clearer? Got any suggestions? I mentioned 3 sponsors in that interview: Walker Corporate Law, Grasshopper & Shopify Swiftype is not a

• polarix 13y ago
  Okay, looking at this again, it's clear that the video/transcript has the good stuff. However: 1. the top banner is too big 2. between it, and the talk of free/premium, and the hype-sounding stuff in the short intro, somehow this pattern-matches to scammy sites for me, and without watching the video I'm expecting it to be minute after minute of buildup with contentless up-selling. 3. Having the transcript in a scrolling box makes it harder to notice that it's actually a representation of what I want, especially when: 4. Leading with the sponsors is really tough. I expect to see sponsors at the end, after I'm appreciative of what the content was. Seeing them at the beginning just annoys me and makes me feel like they're in the way of what I'm trying to do. Since the earlier hooks triggered negative heuristics for me, I didn't power through, and never got to the good stuff. Hope that's more constructive.