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'Tone' may have been the wrong word. Obviously he understands, he did explain it well. I was just trying to point out that he added a bunch of noise under the g
by alanctgardner2 13y ago
'Tone' may have been the wrong word. Obviously he understands, he did explain it well. I was just trying to point out that he added a bunch of noise under the guise of being conversational. Cutting out the noise makes it concise will remaining accessible - I don't think my edits actually changed the tone.
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