First, don't trust us, we are hackers. It looks like you're selling to librarians, so go ask some of them. They are generally very nice and super awesome. Seco

First, don't trust us, we are hackers. It looks like you're selling to librarians, so go ask some of them. They are generally very nice and super awesome. Second, consider adding a 1-line elevator pitch under your tagline. "Online Library Management System" is a good start but it is a bit vague - library of what? Managing how? Try to write a 1-sentence phrase, packed with specific language, directly addressing the pain point(s) and how you are solving them. Something like some of the text in your About/FAQ sections. Third, the cover-swish feature is neat, but the "COVERSWISH" title is hard to grok on first glance. Consider a plain easy-to-parse title. Fourth, your "Detailed Book Information" section does not show very detailed information. Overall pretty slick, but again I am not a librarian and their worldview is different enough from ours that I recommend you spend lots of time with them. :)