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Want to be better? The answer is simple
- xiaoma 13y agoThis was a bit painful to read. Aside from the 23px font size, it opened with 7 consecutive single-sentence "paragraphs". Actually that's not quite true. The fourth, sixth and seventh were comma splices as opposed to actual sentences. The rest of the blog entry was littered with sentence fragments and comma splices. I tried hard to focus on the content, but the presentation was so poor that it had little impact on me. It's not reasonable to expect tech people to be excellent communicators, but I think it's fair to ask for just a 5th grade reading level for material being promoted here.