Site design is nice. But points "1" "2" "3" need the language toned down a bit need something simpler to convey the point. Didn't pass the 1st read test of kno

Site design is nice. But points "1" "2" "3" need the language toned down a bit need something simpler to convey the point. Didn't pass the 1st read test of knowing what you are selling. By the way don't forget to put effort into things other than YC. Not the only game in town or path to success in business life.