Well, for one your banner is kind of strange. I don't understand what Secret Escape has to do with Prospect, which without knowing the name of your product is s

Well, for one your banner is kind of strange. I don't understand what Secret Escape has to do with Prospect, which without knowing the name of your product is suddenly capitalized in the sentence. Your billing table is funny, it looks like a product. Overall, your sales page is weak. I understand it because I'm technical, but it's not something people would immediately swoon and say "I love it." Your current customers -- did you sell personally or did they convert on this webpage? I'm guessing it's the former, and you should think about how you sold them on it. Just some thoughts: + As a HR person, I wouldn't care about it being a SAAS. Just saying "We're improving all the time based on your feedback". Check out what Taleo and Brassring use for their marketing copy. Odds are it works, since you're in a similar space. +The "features" page sounds good but lacks information. What the heck is "The service makes it easy for applicants to get in touch plus with built-in security, Prospect ensures you don't get submissions you dont want either." Are you hiding email addresses, doing filtering, preventing spam submissions? What about the security of my applicants' personal info? +Personally, I want to see what features it has before I scroll down and click the page. +Mentioning support is good, but you don't make the benefit to me clear. Do you have good hours, fast response times? What if I wanted to upgrade to even faster support?