> Not to nitpick but you should not use informal contractions. (I'm) I disagree -- and who are you to say otherwise? > Omit the 'of' after 'all' unless you ch

> Not to nitpick but you should not use informal contractions. (I'm) I disagree -- and who are you to say otherwise? > Omit the 'of' after 'all' unless you change the meaning of the sentence. (all of) If I said "all have been wrong", it would have been a bit more difficult to tell what that part of the sentence was referring to; "all of them have been wrong" includes a bit of helpful linguistic redundancy. > You should avoid using 'thing' - instead, name the entities under discussion. Again, this phrasing was done for stylistic reasons. "This thing" fits well in tone with "one hell of a".