Thanks a lot for all the feedback, it's most appreciated. - My logic was the tldr version would satisfy the busy ppl who didn't want to reach the whole thing

Thanks a lot for all the feedback, it's most appreciated. - My logic was the tldr version would satisfy the busy ppl who didn't want to reach the whole thing - I guess I agree about the scheduling (could have made this simpler), though I basically said 'anytime next week'. - I've signed up for whatever I could find on meetup.com but are there any other particularly good events you can recommend? - the 'evangelist' part of the pitch was probably a bad idea on my part and certainly not very clear. A lot of startups like to hire SIB alumni so I was just saying I could help bring awareness of a particular startup to SIB - on the last point I think you also may have misinterpreted what I wrote. I am not looking for a startup job (I already had a senior management role at a good startup...left it to begin the journey of building something on my own). anyways, thanks again for all the thoughtful points!