This seems like exactly the sort of response this essay doesn't like. It immediately points out flaws without regard to the message as a whole. Finding flaws

This seems like exactly the sort of response this essay doesn't like. It immediately points out flaws without regard to the message as a whole. Finding flaws is valuable if you're doing a startup or figuring out a good design, but if you're in any sort of social situation, it will instantly turn people off to you 100%.