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What part of the sentence do you think is ungrammatical?

• sltkr 13y ago
  1. It's a run-on sentence. There should be a period, or at least semicolon, before “however”. Using a proper conjunction like “but” is possible too, but then the comma following it needs to go. 2. Putting both “also” and “too” in the second clause is redundant.
  • minimax 13y ago
    I agree with #1, but I don't think the also/too redundancy is ungrammatical. It's superfluous but syntactically valid.
    • vog 13y ago
      That's true, but it also has a grammar error: There should be a comma "," before "too".