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STRICTLY speaking you should stay on the path, however, we also encourage a spot of exploring too! Have a wonderful day. The grammar nerd in me is grinding his

STRICTLY speaking you should stay on the path, however, we also encourage a spot of exploring too! Have a wonderful day. The grammar nerd in me is grinding his teeth.

nijk 13y ago
NaturesPlayground made me throw my phone.
minimax 13y ago
What part of the sentence do you think is ungrammatical?
- sltkr 13y ago
  1. It's a run-on sentence. There should be a period, or at least semicolon, before “however”. Using a proper conjunction like “but” is possible too, but then the comma following it needs to go. 2. Putting both “also” and “too” in the second clause is redundant.
  - minimax 13y ago
    I agree with #1, but I don't think the also/too redundancy is ungrammatical. It's superfluous but syntactically valid.
    - vog 13y ago
      That's true, but it also has a grammar error: There should be a comma "," before "too".