Good article, mostly well written except for the painful intellectual insecurity of the writer. It is, in fact, possible to write a scathing, stylised essay wit

Good article, mostly well written except for the painful intellectual insecurity of the writer. It is, in fact, possible to write a scathing, stylised essay without doing backflips to use archaic or obscure vocabulary. Sometimes that's what's required to get a point across, but when it's thrown in so haphazardly (my eyes nearly rolled out of my head when I saw "catholic" used as a synonym for "universal"). Take a deep breath, get your point across, and emphasise the stuff that's important. Don't drag me out of your flow just because you want to show off. Regardless, the writer is going to be awesome once they mature a bit.