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After rereading it, I realised you are right. Lots of errors as well as lacking flow in some of the sentences. Thanks for reading it still. Will definitely impr
by AaronChua 17y ago
After rereading it, I realised you are right. Lots of errors as well as lacking flow in some of the sentences. Thanks for reading it still. Will definitely improve my writing in the future.
- mixmax 17y agoThe information presented was good ,and that's the most important thing.