A minor nit about your ad copy is that you have misspelled Calvin Klein. I would encourage you to remove this whole sentence since it is irrelevant to the busin

A minor nit about your ad copy is that you have misspelled Calvin Klein. I would encourage you to remove this whole sentence since it is irrelevant to the business of building a high-end hosting service. Hope this doesn't come across as negative, I'm just trying to help.