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There is a difference between corporate and mature. Your article sounds like a kid who just discovered swearing. It lowers the information density of your post
by snprbob86 13y ago
There is a difference between corporate and mature. Your article sounds like a kid who just discovered swearing. It lowers the information density of your post and distracts from your message. Furthermore, it reduces your credibility and hurts your persuasive writing goal. Lastly, it makes you sound like a fucking idiot.
- dubcanada 13y agoWhat do you know, you're American.
- aeikenberry 13y agoAs an American who isn't offended in the slightest by swearing, all of this Brit condescension is much more offensive. We get it. You like to think you're so much more sophisticated. Even a slack-jawed blog proves this.
- dasil003 13y agoYou have to admit that in general Brits are much better than Americans at swearing though. The problem in this case is simply the stylistic choice to rely primarily on "fucking" instead of the usual variety of flowery vituperation.
- corin_ 13y agoI'm not sure any of us Brits think our ability to swear is "sophisticated".
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- to3m 13y agoIt is possible the posting could have been made with humorous intent.
- snprbob86 13y agoI'm also male, but I know better than to make sweeping generalizations about women, if I ever hope to work with one. This is the internet. There are Americans here. In fact, most of the sites with these annoying mobile experiences are American companies. Let's assume for a moment that the generalization is accurate... Consider: Successful persuasive writing must be written with a particular audience in mind.
- dreamfactory 13y agoWhy would you assume it's supposed to persuade you of anything? Seems more observational to me.
- qu4z-2 13y agoI'm sure there's another joke at the expense of Americans here, but I can't quite figure it out.
- jaynos 13y agoAmerican here. His colorful use of language sounds exactly like the thoughts in my head when I can't access a mobile site.
- pghmatt 13y agoAgreed! I HATE when I'm searching for something, find a link and when I click it I see these download our app pop-up's or dialogs and then they redirect to the home page and lose the context of what I was trying to see! How hard is it to forward the querystring!
- jnamaya 13y agoDitto from Boston MA.
- reddit_clone 13y agoImo, GP is right. A couple of well placed F-Words in an article do make your feeling apparent. Dozen swear words per paragraph is distracting. Even in real life nobody swears that much! (May be sailors do. I have never met one personally).
- nollidge 13y agoI fucking do, if I'm fucking pissed the fuck off about some fucking thing or another.
- Dewie 13y agoTo me it reads more like someone who's been reading Maddox.