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Great post. I recently rewrote Planscope's welcome email (original here: http://copy-cat.co/blog/a-followup-email-that-actually-works/ http://copy-cat.co/blog/a
by bdunn 13y ago
Great post. I recently rewrote Planscope's welcome email (original here: http://copy-cat.co/blog/a-followup-email-that-actually-works/ http://copy-cat.co/blog/a-followup-email-that-actually-works...), and this time around really emphasized point #9 of yours: providing onboarding tips.
If you don't have a big, fat textarea on your cancellation page that asks people why they're canceling, stop whatever you're doing and spend 30 minutes adding it.
Once you have enough cancellation data, you should know why a lot of people who sign up for a trial cancel within the first few days. Recycle that feedback directly into your welcome email (and in-app onboarding), and aim to eliminate as many confusion points as possible while continuing to reinforce your product benefits.
For the curious, here's the new email template I'm using: http://glui.me/?i=h5f7alhn92c131t/2013-05-07_at_9.52.24_AM.png/ http://glui.me/?i=h5f7alhn92c131t/2013-05-07_at_9.52.24_AM.p...
- cmadan 13y agoI was about to post the copycat link but you beat me to it. :) We've modeled the ClinchPad (my startup) welcome email pretty much on the original Planscope email and it has been very, very successful in getting responses compared to the previous welcome email.
- PebblesRox 13y agoYou have an infestation of apostrophes in some of your plurals! I wouldn't want someone to stop taking you seriously because of a few typos (you have "Monday's" and "customer's" instead of "Mondays" and "customers").
- bdunn 13y agoGood point! Thanks. Serves me right for writing them in a bar in the center of a Vegas casino :-)
- michaelbuckbee 13y agoI can't find the article now, but I'm positive I have seen cases of higher open/click rates in emails with grammatical errors as it seems more "human" and less a template.