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"Get Perks at Local Restaurants & Bars" shouldn't be title cased. It should be "early beta" not "early Beta". The ellipsis after the "etc" should be a period. T
by kintamanimatt 14y ago
"Get Perks at Local Restaurants & Bars" shouldn't be title cased. It should be "early beta" not "early Beta". The ellipsis after the "etc" should be a period. There are many others too.
There were a ton of comments that were incredibly constructive and valid. I appreciate it's your site and you're not beholden to anybody, but almost all the criticism that was given was ignored.
Also, you can edit comments on HN rather than leaving a second as an afterthought.
- tahoecoder 14y agoFixed those errors. Thanks. I did make a lot of changes suggested. I changed my about page a lot, and made copy changes to much of the stuff on the homepage. Keep in mind that this site is still a work in progress and I got caught up with other stuff the rest of the week. I will probably make more of the HN suggested changes later. I'm just saying that not all recommendations fit in with the author's view on something.
- xijuan 14y agoI just saw the webpage for the first time. I agree with you. The writing is very poor on this webpage. Many sentences were awkwardly worded. >Perks include offerings like free appetizers, complimentary drinks and more. This is one of the awkward sentences that I found hard to comprehend at first.. And "early beta" is still not changed..