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Off the top of my head; looks very nice. A few things jump out: * I hate the bird * copy editing: "it's got" -> "it has" everywhere; "in a beautiful way" -
by pseut 13y ago
Off the top of my head; looks very nice. A few things jump out:
* I hate the bird
* copy editing:
"it's got" -> "it has" everywhere;
"in a beautiful way" -> "beautifully" (but really, "... It's got a pinterest layout to show the pages in a beautiful way" doesn't seem to add anything except the word 'pinterest' for SEO).
"Sign up and see what perks merchants are offering to members. Simple as that." makes no sense; so... I sign up, and then you'll tell me what I get for signing up?
edit: agree with other comments that you should not use a gmail account; use the domain.