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It would help if you gave more details (use long copy).
by orangethirty 14y ago
It would help if you gave more details (use long copy).
- smit 14y agoI thought it would be better to make it short and sweet. What details would you suggest adding?
- orangethirty 14y agoI'd try adding some bits as to what's in it for them. Free marketing advice is really not a good offer. Anyone can get it from the millions of marketing "gurus" that infest twitter. Plus add some details about you and a link to your blog (which is pretty good in itself). One last point is that you want people to know you are not some crazy dude from the internet. Have them see you are just a young entrepreneur who wants to make it. Tell a story, but in less than 4 paragraphs. (: Shoot me an email if you'd like to some help. I'm a copy wizard. =P