The original point was put quite simply and your "summary" has messages the original didn't. Just seems a weird way of adding your own opinion as when you star

The original point was put quite simply and your "summary" has messages the original didn't. Just seems a weird way of adding your own opinion as when you start with "let me put _your_ point in plain words," you imply that you are still keeping the point the same, just rewording it, not editorializing.