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Interesting landing page. The choice of three <h1> feels weird. You usually go from <h1> to <h3> for the sub-headlines. The <h1> being the main hook. I would ac
by orangethirty 14y ago
Interesting landing page. The choice of three <h1> feels weird. You usually go from <h1> to <h3> for the sub-headlines. The <h1> being the main hook. I would actually move your second headline ("Do you wish you could learn about business from some of the world's best entrepreneurs?") to the top, and then move the other ones to <h3> tags.Adding a picture of the book cover to the page usually helps sales due to how connects the price to a "tangible" product (even if its not). Make the free sample offer more noticeable. I did not see it the first three times I browsed the page. Tip: use a different color other than blue. The call to action button
also washes away in the theme. Since you are using bootstrap, test using the btn-danger class (which makes it yellow), and change the button font color to black or dark grey. The page background should be a bit lighter to ease readability. Maybe use a light pattern from subtlepatterns.com. Instead of using italics in the second sub-headline ("Then The Found a Business Book is for you.") test changing the font color to a dark red. It tends to improve how much of the page people read.
Still, a very good start. Much better than most startups out there.
- jjets718 14y agoThank you so much for all of this feedback regarding the design of the site. I'll definitely be sure to incorporate some of this feedback when updating the site!
- orangethirty 14y agoGiven that you are currently getting lots of traffic, the best time to test is right now. A .5% improvement could translate into quite a good amount of money.