I really love the idea and the whole premise of an expensive message sending service benefiting a charity, but I'm not sold on the design mockup. I know it's on

I really love the idea and the whole premise of an expensive message sending service benefiting a charity, but I'm not sold on the design mockup. I know it's only a mockup, but it feels a little too unrefined. Not trying to degrade the whole idea, just being honest. I really like the idea and I would love to see something like this on a more larger scale, a service celebrities can sign up for and people can message them for cash.