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Yeah, I don't think you've used RoR.

• UnoriginalGuy 14y ago
  I mentioned RoR and MS's MVC as two examples that do it "right." Was that unclear?
  • abraininavat 14y ago
    Yes, it was unclear, actually. Let's take PHP, ASP.net, and Java. They make up the majority of the internet right now. With RoR and MS MVC being outliers This sounds very much like you're calling RoR and MS MVC outliers with regard to the fraction of the internet they occupy. You're expecting me to know that your use of "outliers" was with respect to a quality not even mentioned in that particular paragraph, rather than with respect to the sentence right before it? Not to mention the fact that With RoR and MS MVC being outliers. is a sentence fragment, so the most obvious correction to your grammar would be to put it together with the preceding sentence. So, yes, you don't write very clearly, so I misunderstood you.
    • itsybitsycoder 14y ago
      I thought it was clear enough. P2: Most tools are document-focused. P3: Some examples of these tools are XYZ. A & B are outliers. P4+: It is very hard to develop applications in "them" (the 'most tools' which are the topic of the comment) without a document focus, and here's some detail about that. It's not winning any writing awards, but it's not at all unintelligible. The organization of a piece of writing doesn't stop at the paragraph level, so to assume that the paragraphs are unrelated is pretty odd.