Okay, I've clearly jumped the gun here. I'm going to take it down, but I really appreciate everyone’s comments. I'm glad that I can use the advice I've already

Okay, I've clearly jumped the gun here. I'm going to take it down, but I really appreciate everyone’s comments. I'm glad that I can use the advice I've already received here, and use it to make a final draft that might be more appropriate to post. Thanks everyone.