That's an interesting idea! The major point I would make is that it isn't clear why you want to work at SpaceX - the only point that alludes to it is that you w

That's an interesting idea! The major point I would make is that it isn't clear why you want to work at SpaceX - the only point that alludes to it is that you want to work there because "Mastering space is one of the toughest challenges this generation will work on, and I want to be a part of that challenge from the beginning by working for one of the first private companies to tackle it" Secondly - I'm not quite sure what you want to do at SpaceX; you haven't really defined your value to the company. If you want some further points email: seb [at] xtextx [dot] com. I used to work as a recruiter.