Great content, but this guy's writing sucks. Take this sentence for an example: After work, though, some are, ironically as correctly described in Steve Jobs’

Great content, but this guy's writing sucks. Take this sentence for an example: After work, though, some are, ironically as correctly described in Steve Jobs’ The Crazy Ones Think Different campaign, misfits, rebels, and troublemakers. At the very least there should be a comma after "ironically". I would also have substituted "however" for "though". George Orwell's 'Politics and the English language' should really be a Wordpress plug in.