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Your copy and design need a little work. One big block of text is hard to read, try breaking it up into bullet points or something similar. The actual text nee
by steveplace 18y ago
Your copy and design need a little work.
One big block of text is hard to read, try breaking it up into bullet points or something similar. The actual text needs work as well; you could pay 40 bucks to hire a copywriter
The blue highlights don't work, hard for eyes to follow.
Put a subtitle below your logo that explains exactly what you are doing. Something like: Dead Simple Server Monitoring
Your FAQ needs formatting, but I'm guessing you are iterating as we speak
The bit about you being in the EU is not needed, unless it's there for legal reasons.
Instead of putting the text explaining you use paypal, just use a paypal icon as well as credit card icons
- mmelin 18y agoThanks a lot for this feedback. All very good points. Since everything is still very non-final (see points on pricing etc.) the copy isn't as polished as it should be.