It was terse, yes. I apologise for that. It was the end of the day and I was feeling tired and irritable. However, I do stand by my original post's intent. I

It was terse, yes. I apologise for that. It was the end of the day and I was feeling tired and irritable. However, I do stand by my original post's intent. I think that copy eliciting funds from potencial backers should be as 'proper' as it can be. To me this communicates a level of professionalism.