It's great but the only people who it would speak to are technical people. If you started with the section on blind people, then security researchers, then go i

It's great but the only people who it would speak to are technical people. If you started with the section on blind people, then security researchers, then go into detail about other things like getting apps from an app store first, you'd appeal to more people. And if I studied english more I'd have learned how to write that without a run-on sentence.