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I think you may want to tweak your copy a bit. So many uses of the words "ad" and "store" that I didn't know what you were talking about by the end of your spie

I think you may want to tweak your copy a bit. So many uses of the words "ad" and "store" that I didn't know what you were talking about by the end of your spiel.

hsuresh 14y ago
Thank you. I will. Let me try to rephrase the text a bit.