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Looks nice, but the text reads as if it was written by a non-native speaker of English, or at least someone who is not really sensitive to the nuances of the la
by ggchappell 14y ago
Looks nice, but the text reads as if it was written by a non-native speaker of English, or at least someone who is not really sensitive to the nuances of the language. I suggest you run the site past a few people who are sensitive.
A few quick thoughts:
(1) A comma is not a clause separator.
Life is complicated.
We made dating simple.
(2) Actually, I think "We make dating simple" sounds better.
(3) Truffle accesses, not access.
(4) "Folks" sounds a little odd to me.
- pacifi30 14y agoAh thanks for the insights, true I am not a native speaker. Will run it tomorrow with couple of people here.