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-- I don't like the blurb on your web site. Satay, a dish of marinated skewered and grilled meats served with sauce, originated in Indonesia in the 19th centur
by CurtMonash 14y ago
-- I don't like the blurb on your web site.
Satay, a dish of marinated skewered and grilled meats served with sauce, originated in Indonesia in the 19th century, invented by street vendors after an influx of immigrants to the country made it popular among locals.
-- Who originated it? Immigrants to Indonesia? Emigrants from Indonesia? I'm really confused.
Staying true to our Indonesian roots, my grandmother created a unique family receipe we could call our own and have passed that receipe down through the family for generations.
-- "Generations" usually means more than 2.
-- These are small things, but if you redo your website at some point, you might want to be somewhat more clear and credible.
- Sataysfied 14y agoThank you for your suggestions. When I can afford to do so, I will have it redone. I know it needs vast improvement. In the meantime I'm going to focus on getting as many customers as I can on foot and through reaching out to people online hoping I can pass this storm.
- kordless 14y agoDude, this guy has bigger problems than you being confused about his semantics. You are just being unfairly picky.
- CurtMonash 14y agoHe's in a highly competitive market. He needs differentiation. Other than the impression he can make upon people who have ALREADY tasted his food, the words on his website are one of his key chances at differentiation.