Oh, I didn't realize that you didn't know the reason. I misunderstood your topic. My complaint was assuming you knew, and were just stringing the reader along i

Oh, I didn't realize that you didn't know the reason. I misunderstood your topic. My complaint was assuming you knew, and were just stringing the reader along installment after installment while diving into details before getting to the meat of the story. Now, knowing that you don't know why all your meetings with banks were cancelled, and knowing that you ultimately don't know why banks don't want to play ball, it makes a lot more sense the way you're telling the story. And I'm sure your narrative style is much better than if I tried to tell it.