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I'm in the industry so I get what you're saying here - but I'm pretty sure most VCs and your customers are going to be mighty confused. You should try and simpl
by RyanZAG 14y ago
I'm in the industry so I get what you're saying here - but I'm pretty sure most VCs and your customers are going to be mighty confused. You should try and simplify a 'what we do' message that is easier to understand.
The first 30 seconds of introduction to your concept is the most important - make sure people can understand it!
- Redoubtable 14y agoIndeed! We've rarely had a confused customer thankfully.
- pekk 14y agoThis is also consistent with confused people not becoming customers.
- Redoubtable 14y agoHeh well yes. Logical win :-)
- iosnoob 14y agoI'm also in the industry and I second this. Speak plain English and explain in a nustshell what you do for whom. Investors and brands are busy, make it easy for them.
- lancewiggs 14y agoWithout looking at the site, here are three potential what we do messages: "We help businesses make compelling games using their own customer's data" "We help businesses make personalised games for their customers" "Personalised games for your customers"