This is all written deeply from your perspective of doing this 24/7 for months. You have to step back, shed all of that immersion, and write to the perspective

This is all written deeply from your perspective of doing this 24/7 for months. You have to step back, shed all of that immersion, and write to the perspective of someone who's never heard of this before. Also, a much better angle for posting this on HN might be "Tired of friends asking to help setup their blogs?" This audience doesn't need your service, but they probably get a fair number of requests for help with things exactly like this and may send customers your way.