Cheers and thank you! It is the first story in a whole collection called "Common Fantasies for Strong People." http://www.miraclejones.com/common.html http://

Cheers and thank you! It is the first story in a whole collection called "Common Fantasies for Strong People." http://www.miraclejones.com/common.html http://www.miraclejones.com/common.html I wrote code for the collection so that readers can comment on every paragraph, and also, the paragraphs light up to signify where the comments are. The darker the paragraph, the more comments that are lurking inside.