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How about changing it to "didn't only die" or "didn't merely die"? I first thought it was about someone who hadn't died. Then I started reading the article and

by iNate2000 14y ago

How about changing it to "didn't only die" or "didn't merely die"? I first thought it was about someone who hadn't died. Then I started reading the article and thought it was about someone with the same name. THEN I realized what I was reading.

danboarder 14y ago
@iNate2000 good suggestions, I had considered a similar edit but then found the edit link was no longer available due to HN's time limit for making edits.