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The post title to me has the possibility of him still being alive... I find the full title much more clear. "Should We Talk about the Fact That Jody Sherman Di
by DuskStar 14y ago
The post title to me has the possibility of him still being alive... I find the full title much more clear.
"Should We Talk about the Fact That Jody Sherman Didn't Just Die, But That He Killed Himself?"
- danboarder 14y agoThe title was truncated to fit in the allotted HN title field (80 characters). I agree it could be re-written for further clarity though.
- DuskStar 14y agoAh, that makes sense. I was half expecting an article on how they haven't recovered his body and there were plane tickets to Guatemala purchased in his name...
- iNate2000 14y agoHow about changing it to "didn't only die" or "didn't merely die"? I first thought it was about someone who hadn't died. Then I started reading the article and thought it was about someone with the same name. THEN I realized what I was reading.
- danboarder 14y ago@iNate2000 good suggestions, I had considered a similar edit but then found the edit link was no longer available due to HN's time limit for making edits.