Alright, there's no need to repeat ourselves. I'm a numbers guy. For me, any argument needs either a straight logical step or some type of numbers to back it up

Alright, there's no need to repeat ourselves. I'm a numbers guy. For me, any argument needs either a straight logical step or some type of numbers to back it up. I respect your approach towards things, because I know it works also. (I just don't like it, because it needs experience.) So I'll say you did make a good number of good points, and seen from the angle you are approaching it at, what you wrote is a good essay.