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Ditto comments about design, wall of text, layout, logo, etc. Also add one or more photo to illustrate what your service does; maybe include a beauty salon, ap
by generalseven 14y ago
Ditto comments about design, wall of text, layout, logo, etc.
Also add one or more photo to illustrate what your service does; maybe include a beauty salon, appointment book, salon employees at work, etc.
Make your best call to action easy to find on the home page "Sign up for 30-day free trial.."
Improve the call to action on your contact page from something like "Snip was built, and is run, by Jason Swett, who can be reached in the following ways..." to "If you'd like to schedule a personal conversation to talk about what Snip can do for your beauty salon, just call..."
The phrase "hair salon software product" sounds like a vague and dull description of your service. Your description of what Snip is and does should be more clear and appealing.