> Your attitude is why even short videos shared on social media today begin with a few seconds showing the "payoff" of the video. Nah, you've missed my point a

> Your attitude is why even short videos shared on social media today begin with a few seconds showing the "payoff" of the video. Nah, you've missed my point and replaced it with some other gripe you have with the current world. These attention deficit previews are something else entirely from what I said. OP wrote an article that jumps in with a list, but it should've jumped in with "In the following paragraphs, I will explain this for that reason, because I think that XYZ". (Edit: Which, the LLM just reminded me, is simply an abstract) It simply lacks an opener. (And in addition, it lacks flow between these individual sections, but that could be okay if the opener handles that problem)