Perhaps if you read it as "Why I Won't RELOCATE to Work for Your Startup" it doesn't come off quite as pompous. Is it any less pompous to say: "I would like to

Perhaps if you read it as "Why I Won't RELOCATE to Work for Your Startup" it doesn't come off quite as pompous. Is it any less pompous to say: "I would like to hire you, but you have to leave where you live and everyone you know and come to me?"