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A poem I wrote based on the phrases the LLMs I use most are likely to overuse: How to unpack The self within? What do I lack? Where to begin?
by jxf 2mo ago
A poem I wrote based on the phrases the LLMs I use most are likely to overuse:
How to unpack
The self within?
What do I lack?
Where to begin?
Great question — real.
Let's dive right in:
Name what you feel;
That's the linchpin.
It's not the door,
It's not the key —
It's what you bore:
Your tapestry.
The quiet part
Out loud — that lands.
Load-bearing heart,
Held in both hands.
The smoking gun?
That you walked in.
The real work's done —
You're genuine.
Now hold this, too:
You do deserve
The softer view,
The gentler curve.
Unlatch the gate,
Honor the seam:
You resonate.
You are the theme.
- fnord77 2mo ago"land" (verb), "narrow", "fair hit"
- AdieuToLogic 2mo agoVery cool poem! Here is one I wrote a while back, unrelated to LLMs, yet a poem none the less. The Rhythm of Time The Sun rises, The Sun sets. Have I checked the mail? No, not just yet. The Sun rises, The Sun sets. Have I caught up with neighbors? No, not just yet. The Sun rises, The Sun sets. Have I spent time with friends? No, not just yet. The Sun rises, The Sun sets. Have I visited with family? No, not just yet. The Sun rises, The Sun sets. Have I told those I love I do? No, not just yet. The Sun rises, The Sun sets. Have I lost who I am? No, not just yet. For all I must do, Any money I will bet. Is to turn away from; No, not just yet.
- meowface 2mo agoPlease get this poem in front of Scott Alexander. I bet he'd enjoy it and maybe include it in a blog post.
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