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It's neat, but I'm not entirely sure what the animations contribute. What's neat about games like RollerCoaster Tycoon is watching this entire map full of thin

by mcphage 2mo ago

It's neat, but I'm not entirely sure what the animations contribute. What's neat about games like RollerCoaster Tycoon is watching this entire map full of things happening without needing to be controlled, but this doesn't really have that. There's your vehicle moving around, and there's people wandering around, but they're not doing anything. It doesn't feel like a factory of connected components.

aurmc 2mo ago
I thought it was cute. The RCT style didn't really add anything other than showing it on a conveyor belt of sorts, but it was cute and in a world where HTML and CSS are practically free to make, we might as well spend some tokens on making educational content a bit more digestible. I'm sure there's a plaintext essay that can explain this just as well if the RCT style was distracting.
- rkagerer 2mo ago
  Mission achieved: It's cute. Some feedback on the UI. Just knowing there was an automatic timer made me feel rushed while reading each expanded step (regardless of speed selected), so I tried to manually take over the navigation, by using the pause button, next step button, and tapping factories. This caused my conveyor cart to somehow become decoupled from the current step and felt kind of buggy. I also felt trapped in the Loop, which went around 3 times. I didn't notice an exit button. Better yet, this is a transition where perhaps a swift animation of the cart going around a few times on its way to the next step may help communicate the sense of repetitiveness you're trying to make the user feel. I was on mobile and I noticed by the end of the park my phone had gotten quite noticeably hot - which is unusual except when under heavy gaming load. Thanks for putting this together. Ironically, I found your concise and frank little written synopsis at each step the most interesting part.
- mcphage 2mo ago
  > I'm sure there's a plaintext essay that can explain this just as well if the RCT style was distracting. Not distracting, just felt like a missed opportunity. A factory simulation that you could watch the different ingredients come in and travel through different building would have been neat.
bluezly 2mo ago
I had the same feeling. I think it would click more if the cart visibly changed after each station — add a layer, change color, get cut into dies, etc. Then the animation would be doing some of the explaining instead of mostly being scenery.
- laurentiurad 2mo ago
  I added just that! Thanks for the feedback!

by mcphage 2mo ago

aurmc 2mo ago

I thought it was cute. The RCT style didn't really add anything other than showing it on a conveyor belt of sorts, but it was cute and in a world where HTML and CSS are practically free to make, we might as well spend some tokens on making educational content a bit more digestible. I'm sure there's a plaintext essay that can explain this just as well if the RCT style was distracting.

rkagerer 2mo ago
Mission achieved: It's cute. Some feedback on the UI. Just knowing there was an automatic timer made me feel rushed while reading each expanded step (regardless of speed selected), so I tried to manually take over the navigation, by using the pause button, next step button, and tapping factories. This caused my conveyor cart to somehow become decoupled from the current step and felt kind of buggy. I also felt trapped in the Loop, which went around 3 times. I didn't notice an exit button. Better yet, this is a transition where perhaps a swift animation of the cart going around a few times on its way to the next step may help communicate the sense of repetitiveness you're trying to make the user feel. I was on mobile and I noticed by the end of the park my phone had gotten quite noticeably hot - which is unusual except when under heavy gaming load. Thanks for putting this together. Ironically, I found your concise and frank little written synopsis at each step the most interesting part.
mcphage 2mo ago
> I'm sure there's a plaintext essay that can explain this just as well if the RCT style was distracting. Not distracting, just felt like a missed opportunity. A factory simulation that you could watch the different ingredients come in and travel through different building would have been neat.

bluezly 2mo ago

I had the same feeling. I think it would click more if the cart visibly changed after each station — add a layer, change color, get cut into dies, etc. Then the animation would be doing some of the explaining instead of mostly being scenery.

laurentiurad 2mo ago
I added just that! Thanks for the feedback!