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Hey, sorry about dissing your site. It's not that bad and could be tuned up quite easily. – The text shadows on the main page are a bit much. 1px offset is suf
by msutherl 14y ago
Hey, sorry about dissing your site. It's not that bad and could be tuned up quite easily.
– The text shadows on the main page are a bit much. 1px offset is sufficient and the shadow color probably doesn't need to be so light.
– Grey boxes around text are too tight and probably shouldn't be so rounded.
– Headers on home-page are either too big or aren't given enough space. Whitespace! Don't be afraid to use it.
– Darker shadows on headers have the same problem – too much offset – just looks tacky.
– Title and description on homepage looks crammed into the top. Give it more space. Maybe smaller text.
– Red headers are way too bright. Tone it down.
– The bathroom-tile background image is kind of weird.
– Body text is too wide throughout the docs.
– More whitespace throughout the design would help (between all typographic elements), especially given your choice of a large, open typeface.